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Rewrites & drafts
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Mission Impossible Dead Reckoning Part One (2023)
Christopher McQuarrie, Eddie Hamilton
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And these, you know, when we're on this side of Tom, we can be more internal with him, you know, for these moments. Yeah, so all of these line crosses are actually deliberate. I love Henry's acting. Look at his eye muscles. Oh, I know. It's just, it's so good. He's really phenomenal. And he very, very carefully rewrites specific lines, chooses additional words, willingly whispered one word. And when he adds the word willingly,
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elegant rewrite from Henry Cerny, just adding the word authentic. Yes. Face. That's better, isn't it? Yeah. Face to authentic face. So good. And the first time we watched this in a theater, in a cut much longer, no music in the third act, no visual effects. And Hayley said her line and what was really sensational.
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Marcel the Shell with Shoes On (2021)
Dean Fleischer Camp, Jenny Slate, Nick Paley
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